Mad Man Sympathy

“Why can’t you have sympathy for me?” the mad man raved, his meat cleaver flinging blood through the air.

The detective blinked, his brow furrowing.

Sympathy? Is that what he wanted from him?

If he wanted that, he shouldn’t have dismembered him.

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3 thoughts on “Mad Man Sympathy

  1. Is what he wanted from him?

    If he wanted that he shouldn’t have dismember him.

    The above should be:

    Is that what he wanted from him?
    If he wanted that, he shouldn’t have dismembered him.

    Other than that, it’s a quick and interesting (if not morbid) little piece. Enjoyed it quite a bit. Keep up the writing!

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